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JustBreathe by ~MissMellonCollie:iconMissMellonCollie:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed


I once wished on stars.
I wished for all the things you'd never actually be.
[now I only wish for your demise]

I started avoiding town when possible.
There was no telling what I'd do if we just so happened to meet.
[throw up. run you over. simultaneously]

Eating became difficult.
three bites and I wanted to sick all over.
[one finger and I would have]

Then I wouldn't eat.
And not enough ibuprofen in the world could healthily cure my headaches.
[but they were all I could eat]

I stopped going online
Just to avoid temptation of messaging you or confrontation.
[It was the only time I appreciated where I live and the lack of service.]

Come August, everything will change.
My town will become our town and there will be no escape.
[I hate to say, but G-boro isn’t big enough for the both of us.]

Somewhere along the line I lost it.
I lost myself that night when I decided you were cute and I needed compensation.
[Somehow, I wonder if I actually had it to begin with.]
©2009 ~MissMellonCollie
:iconmissmelloncollie:

Author's Comments

June. 5 . 2009
because sometimes I forget.



So, I'm wondering if this is finished.
Feedback please?




god it's the truth.

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~Eris2559 Jun 4, 2009, 8:39:10 PM
"[throw up. run you over. simultaneously]"

my FAVORITE line :D made me laugh while the rest made me cry

--
If something happens and you think it was me. Yeah...it probably was. :nod:
:iconworldly-goods:
~worldly-goods Jun 5, 2009, 3:38:00 PM
iloveyou
ilikethis
The brackets work well.

--
Redheads not warheads, blondes not bombs
We're talkin' about brunettes not fighter jets
It's got to be Sweet 16's not M-16's
When will the governments realize it's got to be funky sexy ladies?
:iconmissmelloncollie:
~MissMellonCollie Jun 6, 2009, 11:49:32 AM
<3


kick him in the shins.
:iconyellowierd0:
=Yellowierd0 Jun 7, 2009, 1:46:41 PM
:hug:
I love this.
Sometimes we need to be slapped in the face to realise what we're doing to ourselves.
This is so well written, I especially love the brackets. :heart:

--
Flavius: What do you call those?
Spock: I call them ears.
Flavius: Are you trying to be funny?
Spock: Never.

:shakefish:
:iconmissmelloncollie:
~MissMellonCollie Jun 7, 2009, 9:25:02 PM
thank you so much :hug:
it means the world...

I dont ever realize I do these things to myself...
sometimes, I still feel sick...
I don't ever actually throw up...it just...hurts..and my head feels like it's going to explode...

I just hate i let myself get so involved..to the point where it all affects me so physically...more so than mentally or emotionally...
:iconyellowierd0:
=Yellowierd0 Jun 8, 2009, 12:28:50 PM
:hug: you're very welcome.
I know how you feel, it is so freakin' hard to realise what's going on, but every now and then you just have to stop yourself and think "what am I doing? Is this good? Or bad?"
You just need some time to sort yourself out before you start getting involved with other people, just take a breather, give yourself some you time too calm down.
It will get easier, you just need to figure out what's going on.

--
Flavius: What do you call those?
Spock: I call them ears.
Flavius: Are you trying to be funny?
Spock: Never.

:shakefish:
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